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>>50901348
Don't bog yourself too much on time limits, even if they are only self made. You need to take the writing as it comes and is fun. The more you enjoy those other entertaining things you mentioned, the more you can come back to your writing fresher and might even have new ideas thanks to those other things you did. If you want both, I bet you can strike a good balance. Keep at it, and keep having fun, with all things.

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Kaela is exceptionally cute today... am I permitted to say that?

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>>49666010
TSKR

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Kaela will make Ame a shulker box with a ton of goodies which Ame will never log on to find

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I like when Kaela rrrrrrrrrrrrolls her rrrrrrrrr's

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hello irystocrats, your oshi is very cute

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Kaela starts in a minute, watch her
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ab0AdZAF20w

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>>49007554
Cheers my friend

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>>48835370
I love her dedication

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Everyone shut the fuck up, Kaela's streaming

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>>48791145

Kaela.

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>>48557926
she's being considerate

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>>48433510
>possibly opening it to kaeluarga
Neat

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>>47955098
Godspeed.

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>>47884998
Hey, congrats brother!

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>>47690552
we've gotten plenty of shorts, soundclips, and tweets

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>>47558775
Not bad. I'm interested to see what the first installment of this story you have looks like. I think the grammar could use a little once over though. For example: "However, not every soul is pleased with that idea and escape form the Underworld."
Unless it's meant to be implied that any soul who doesn't want to be there escapes the underworld, it would flow better to to word it as they attempt it, rather than succeed indefinitely.
"try to escape from the underworld." Another proofread might help you find the sentences that could flow just a little bit better too. I got no hard opinions for or against the rapping reaper, but the flavor and potential of her lore is sometimes too good to pass up. Another potential piece of feedback if you intend to continue with a bestiary / journal styling, make full use of spacing formatting, like adding notes of just things like "weapons to have: 1, 2, 3, etc" or "Number encountered so far: 7, got a bad gash from number 4" There's a lot of fun things you can do to make it really eye catching while also sprinkling fun info here and there.

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This collab was real cozy
Your oshi's cute as hell
Have a good one saplings

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>>47368237
Mine would be infinite fetch quests and collecting rare materials

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>white bread

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>>47051281
>(69)
All signs are pointing to Kaela being cute.

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