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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy. You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below: https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>74364055
(Where we discussed girl failures, Suisei slutting it up and getting Biboo Taxed)

/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There were 4 stories posted last thread

The gamer of En
>>74375823
TAGS: Fauna, Futanari

Moomer
>>74420661
Tags: Mumei, Kronii, wedgie

Time Daddy
>>74486231
Tags: Kronii, Mumei, NSFW, futanari, breeding, daddy kink

Night with My Teddy Bear, Nene (UPDATE!)
>>74310603
Tags: Nene Momosuzu, Fluff, Cuddling

>> No.74576723
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>>74576336
Battle shonen about maids that you can fuck

>> No.74577028

shouldnt have archived pekofag's story

>> No.74577811

>>74577028
Which fic was his?

>> No.74577877

this bread is sweet in 3 separate segments filled with a different flavor of jam. the flavors blend well together, but i fear if it's not eaten soon, it'll spoil and start to smell...I also have the urge to rewatch Inuyasha while I eat it.

>> No.74577988

>>74576275
Ah yes, the new episode of /wg/! /wg/ Z Budokai!

>> No.74578052

>>74488323
> extremely straight-laced (most likely extremely autistic instead) older brother innocently asks his precious little sister Suisei to hold and smell her
> she doesn't have it in her to refuse as he is the only one for who she doesn't have to play a prim and proper girl or an idol
Apple of Her Eye but with way less trauma and with more dubious consent as onii-chan doesn't really understand that he is attracted to her

>> No.74578234

Fuck you whoever wrote Cold Air, Hot Blood. I leave this place and I hope to never re-open this thread but every 6 fucking months this fanfic haunts me in my dreams. Now I have to come back and backread half a year of content to scratch that romance itch that never ever goes away.

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>>74577877
This is like the blue cheese of breads. The mold is actually good and part of the flavour profile.

Also shiori fics when.

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>>74576336
making a "woo woo ghost blowjob" joke and then getting your dick absolutely demolished by the gwak bustin' triple delux minty breath 3000

>> No.74579476

>>74577988
Who is the yamcha of /wg/

>> No.74579701

>>74579476
towa...

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>> No.74580229

>>74578234
Ojou is too precious to truly forget, after all.

>> No.74580360

>>74578549
If she ever decides to commit to you, you can't even physically decline her - she can phase through everything

>> No.74580814

>>74580360
To that Anon who wanted a rimjob. Keep in mind she can phase through you and give you the fobidden blowrim

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>>74579476
i just chose this pic because it looks pretty

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arise and write not-fruity things

>> No.74582884

>>74566230
... yes?

>> No.74582960

>>74579476
Yeah, Towa

>> No.74583892

>>74532049
It's nice to receive a reply like this with a lot of thoughts into the subject.
>There's also the angle of how are you writing it. If you drifted apart...is it melancholic in a good way? (Hey fuutan, remember DMC? you loved that game hahaha! oh we had good times!)
This is close to what I had in my mind. I got an idea for a short fic along those lines, but since I've never changed my oshi I'll give it a slightly different spin (well, it's of course not like I can't write about something that doesn't fit my actual exprerience but I just think I'd rather not in this case).

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>> No.74586462

>>74583892
nice. I kind of have an idea of coming across a "retired" chuuba and catching up in a cafe, before walking away into the sunset having closed that chapter of your life but i dont think ill commit because i didnt watch Mel/Sana and i feel like a coco version feels weird
miguel gato doesnt deserve fics

>> No.74586790

don't worry fellas the fic you're waiting for will update soon
source: my crystal ballsack

>> No.74586895

>>74586462
> spoiler
I mean, there are *some* chuubas that have these features and a brain that isn't as cooked as hers.
But none of them capture the feeling of being feral. Maybe Rurudo comes close.

You could always write about her pre-complete meltdown of her public image. Or embrace the kayfabe and completely disregard her personality.

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>>74586790

>> No.74587344

>>74586790
finally...Ruffling Some Feathers part 2...

>> No.74587766

>>74586895
>Or embrace the kayfabe and completely disregard her personality
Ninnisani anon is the closest to buddha for mastering that power because its impossible for me

>> No.74588056

>>74586790
>don't worry fellas the fic you're waiting for will update soon
The day it gets another part is the day when my mum wins the lottery.

In other words - never.

>> No.74588159

>>74587344
Teasing Anal and leaving it for the sequel should be illegal

>> No.74588510

>>74585181
Huge Onion's onions!

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Ravaging Sakamata and watching her big tits bounce back and forth, letting them hypnotize you, make you fall into trance, make you feel as if everything was in slow motion... it's a rather interesting thing to contemplate.

>> No.74589665

>>74589490
I'd like to read about a woman who can literally hypnotize people with her tits.

>> No.74589910

Where do you guys find your inspiration?

>> No.74589933

>>74589490
>Chloe hypnotizing you to stop being a cuck.
>Getting you to fuck her until you literally pass out.
>All the while squeezing out more and more of your back story with every orgasm.

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>>74589910
A number of places. My head. Other fics from here. Streams. Music. Other media. Sometimes even just walking outdoors. Inspiration is around every corner and every blow of the wind.

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>>74589665
>>74589933
That could be the first episode of the Holo Files

>> No.74590416

>>74589992
Anon, with Chloe the opportunity to call it the HoloX Files was right there.

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>>74589910
Fiction; remixing ideas of others and adapting them into new contexts
Listening to music pretty much automatically kickstarts my imagination and all kinds of scenarios start playing in my head
My fetishes
>>74590416
It was hiding in plain sight holy fucking shit I can't believe I missed that

>> No.74590657

>>74589910
All forms of media. A song might make me feel a super specific emotion that merits a couple of scenes. A single line of a book can inspire a few more.

What I think is the best, is the works of any kind that are so good they inspire any kind of emotion in you. Picasso said it best, good artists create, great artists steal.

>> No.74591190

>>74589910
Really anything, from a piece of media to a nice idea can work. Also plots from doujins that make me go "this is hot but it lacks something"

>> No.74591250

>>74591190
>Also plots from doujins that make me go "this is hot but it lacks something"
This, nothing hits harder quite like
>Holy fuck, my dick is gonna love this, but my heart would love some romance and drama with it too

>> No.74592125

>>74586462
>spoiler
You can't stop me

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>>74592125
Title: My Memoirs 2019-2022 - Unsuccessfully Coping with the Natural Beauty of Infidelity (Rushia You Fucking Cunt)

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>>74586462
>Mel
dammit
I miss her every time I'm reminded of her

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>>74578234
I'm...sorry?

>> No.74595276

>>74576275
cute group

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Stuffed duck.

>> No.74596501

>>74576517
>Night with My Teddy Bear, Nene (UPDATE!)
Reposting Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTUYmNKU4oDVRjUL1Pp0l_tuJQcEr_lYRTiev7qRmOldCgXASaU79BcndetEj8X4xQk_Ho-7uOlSAs3/pub

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>> No.74601240

>>74596013
Duck Milf

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>>74586462
>miguel gatomon

>> No.74603369

>>74586462
>spoiler
I disagree, it's not like she is receiving them.
And they don't have to be dedicated to her, or even just paint her in a positive light.

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>>74578234
Are you reading all the fics, most of them or just the Ayame ones?

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>> No.74605476

>>74604446
I imagine the point of view character is very dense, like
> "Hmm, so strange. She came here with the coffee, but she is wearing a shirt while completely exposing her body! Why would she do that? I imagine it's kinda cold like this, I don't exactly have good heating-"

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>>74576336
Something to heal a weary soul

>> No.74605710

>>74605476
>"Wow, Foobs, you sure drink a lot of coffee, huh? Hey, give me a minute whilst I make some for myself."

>> No.74606032
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>>74605710
Fubuki is an experienced coffee provider

>> No.74606225

>>74605548
What's the fic in the archive that did it the best for you so far?

>> No.74607175

>>74606225
NTA but almost anything fluffy with Mio or Fubuki does it for me.
I would've read more of Three Cream, Three Sugar if it included more scenes of pampering Mio.

>> No.74607539

>>74606225
That's a tough one. Out of the ones I've read the only thing that comes to mind is the early part of Our Cures, specifically Anon/Aqua stuff.

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>> No.74610869

>>74603369
i mean. i never bought into her GF stuff but there is no more fitting punishment that a slow descent into oblivion. That's why i said she doesnt deserve them.
No anger, no sadness, nothing. Just her fading into black after she threw her life away

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thicc girls? slampig content?

>> No.74614210

>>74611505
Sorry, they lost weight after I gave them intense workouts.

>> No.74614591

>>74614210
>>74611505
>Pseudo-NTR fic where (You) cry watching a thicc slut turn her life around starting with regular exercise.

>> No.74615476

>>74610719
POV: You're the guy who killed their evil parents and adopted the two as babies

>> No.74616695

>>74614591
>Watch from behind a plank as your wife, Polka, gets on all fours in front of a muscly instructor
>She's sweaty, tired, and ready for more
>Tears run down your eyes
>"Are you ready, Pol-chan?"
>"Ready~!"
>"And, plank position, on your side, good, hold it, twist and reach under you.
>NO! NOT YOUR WIFE'S LOVE HANDLES!

>> No.74617389

>>74616695
>watch from behind a plank
https://youtu.be/2vXbmlOPPoQ?si=OzXuZNF6yh1J-Lwj

>> No.74619432

>>74616695
>THEY EVEN DOING CARDIO?! OH THE HUMANITY!

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Tonight, I shall write.

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You should write about fucking your aunt, NOW!

>> No.74622742

>>74603618
Most of them, I’m not too interested in NSFW, however I do open some with tags that would seem interesting. There’s also like only 5 fics tagged as Enemies to Lovers and I’m saddened.

>> No.74623171

>>74594572
YOU. I’d strangle you irl if I didn’t have so many things to do that are actively being procrastinated on right now

>> No.74625767

>>74622117
BILLIONS of aunts must be impregnated.

>> No.74626671

>>74625767
>Drunk Lui pounces on you celebrating your [REDACTED] birthday
>YOU'RE NOT GONNA LET THE CAKE GO BAD, RIGHT ANON?
>Gotta make yourself a cousin

>> No.74628501

>>74626671
>starts the night asking you how are are you and some pleasantries
>half a bottle later she's giggling and asking if you got a girlfriend
>a bottle later (your dad is drunk) she's teasing you under the table with her feet
>A bottle and some glasses later she's sitting in your lap and teasing you
>ten minutes later you are getting cowgirl from your aunt

>> No.74629533

>>74626671
>>74628501
I like the idea of you visiting her and as she gets drunk she starts throwing hints that she needs a man in her life until she goes
>Hey kid, wanna lose your virginity?

Also if you get her pregnant and in the family reunion she plays dumb until she gets close and goes "good work to you too daddy"

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>>74629533
>visiting grandmama's house for uncle lou's marriage
>yadda yadda balls deep in aunt Lui by the first night
>an entire week of escalating your degenerate incest with your aunt until by the last day you two are fucking in the middle of the garden. Literally anyone taking a peek out of the window would see you two bringing a child into the world
>put triplets in her. Next year you'll do the sameuntil you can leave home and actually go provide for your kids

>> No.74631129

>>74576336
Passing out in the snowy woods after suffering severe injuries and waking up in a chuuba's lodge who is helping you recover

>> No.74632013

>>74631129
That chuuba is Fauna and she helps you recover exclusively through nursing handjobs. Her breast milk has magical healing properties or something.

>> No.74633815

Bump

>> No.74636413

>>74632013
Doesn't this fic exist in the archive already but Fauna is a cannibal or something?

>> No.74636612

Is Heartbreak Tokyo anon still here? The dirty action in this series is so good

>> No.74636882

>>74636612
Posted just last thread >>74514187

>> No.74638413

>>74630614
I never knew the idea of Auntcest would be so good

>> No.74639030

>>74636882
Thanks, are there books like this, not necessarily fics, that focus on brutal action? I realize that Hotline Miami is the inspiration so I’m replaying that too

>> No.74639756

>>74576336
Riku rapes Dokibird in a fit of rage.

>> No.74640132

>>74576336

Yandere Roboco. I think there's interesting potential in exploring the concept of a machine that has a loose grasp on emotion, but she knows she wants you. She doesn't get why she should care about the destruction she leaves in her wake. I'm envisioning her genuinely trying to understand why you're freaking out after she just murdered one of your relatives.

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>> No.74642757

>>74622117
As long as my aunt is younger than me.

>> No.74642847

>>74622742
The tag system is sometimes not enough to tell how much romance a smut fic is going to have. Though I love the smut properly tagged with romance.

>> No.74643692

>>74642847
Yeah that makes sense, I originally used to read everything here even fics with the less conventional fetishes like architecture. If there’s one tag I always go for it’s the idea discussion thread greens, those are always fun.

>> No.74644997

>>74643692
I read all the Nene and Ayame fics plus anything that looks interesting. The greentext compilations are great fun, especially if one contributed oneself.

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>>74622117
Lui-nee please stop draining my balls. I'm trying to write a sfw action story...

>> No.74647042

>>74644997
Ooh yeah I forgot to mention the horror ones are great too, Ina’s a great character for these kinds of things

>> No.74648180

I crave the domloss that "Your Time is Gonna Come" has for Kronii. I want more fics where she gets manhandled. She is at her most erotic when she is fucked silly with her pride shattered and womb filled.

>> No.74648904

>>74648180
That was a fun fic, though I'd prefer it if she was more into it but alatsundere about secretly liking what's done to her.

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>> No.74650897

>>74611505
Whatever happened to that okayu slampig prompt?

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You can't die yet~

>> No.74653141

azki_survive.jpg

>> No.74653613

>>74653142
sorry im jerking off to haato

>> No.74655236

>>74630614
Go even harder into the incest until you become a hilly billy
>Go to the countryside because dad sent you there for a summer job or something.
> Bend Aunt Lui over every furniture available
>Show Nene, your cousin, the marvels of outdoor sex
>Correcting your nephew Kobo
>Little sister Suisei is moping? A good dicking will fix that.
>And once they all have a baby bun in the oven, the degeneracy reaches critical mass
>Cuck your father by drowning Mio's eggs with young virile cum. Go back to the city with your mom
>Turn the family tree into a family circle

>> No.74657257

>>74655236
Do the children end up with deformations?

>> No.74657316

>>74648904
No disrespect to the author but it really took me off how easy she folds chapter 2. Inbetween that and the constant flipflop of comedy i didnt quite like it,altough i can commend his originality and fun dialogue

>> No.74657380

>>74655236
>nephew kobo
?

>> No.74657432

>>74657257
One generation of incest doesnt produce mutants, so at the absolute worst You might produce an Aqua.
But if you keep the incest through generations yeah

>> No.74657580

>>74657380
Freudian slip perhaps

>> No.74657633

>>74655236
How good would the dicking have to be, and how good of a person would Anon have to be for this to happen? Some sort of sea wench (Finana?) cursing your bloodline to loop in a circle? This sort of degeneracy requires a lot of brainpower to justify.

>> No.74657844

>>74657432
>One generation of incest doesnt produce mutants, so at the absolute worst You might produce an Aqua.
I am perfectly fine with this.
>But if you keep the incest through generations yeah
Not this, though. If there's gonna be incest through generations at worst it should only as you say "produce an Aqua". And when you mean that you mean mentally retarded, no?

Sorry if I'm not making any sense and that I'm "repeating" what you just said to me back to you. Basically what I'm saying is this:

- incest through generations = okay as long as there's no physical deforms and they only end up mentally retarded. But you could fix this by bringing them up properly, no?

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>>74657844
anon are you on drugs? its not that hard.
Incest doesnt produce deformation and downs instantly. Its why cousins can marry in some places.
Its repeated incest (cousinX cousin>sisterXbrother) through generations that poisons the genes

>> No.74661065

>>74660224
>Incest doesnt produce deformation and downs instantly.
It doesn't? I genuinely thought it did and its why I was worried about "deformation" happening in a fic to begin with.

>> No.74661341

>>74657316
NTA I don't like writing noncon unless everyone likes it midway through at the latest (even if they don't want to admit it)

>> No.74661483

>>74657633
i think the original anon made a mistake writing "family circle" because what i understood is one anon banging his family over the summer...unless i misunderstood and we are talking about the origin story of that VN protagonist that always gets posted
>>74661065
the easiest way to understand it is that your genes have chances to pass on good and bad parts of you+your partner.
diversifiying the genetic pool by adding posibilities makes it so your kids have less chances to inherit bad stuff because there's a lot to roll ( and if they do, they might get bad eyesight or something minor). Lets say for the sake of the argument that your chance of having a deformed kid its like 3%
Breeding with your cousin/sister wont turn that 3% into a 50%. At worst it might be a 4% and it will probably be something minor, but if your kid goes and commits incest then that turns that 4% into a 10% and so on and so forth.
European nobility and pugs became the horror stories we know over generations, not in one sitting

TLDR: fuck your aunt, its cool

>> No.74661801

>>74661341
im fine with cheating the noncon aspect by drugs or falling in love/liking it but i feel like it needs to be earned. I didnt like how Kronii just proposes sex and then it stretches its head into comedy with the whole music thing...even though i do find the setting and all the comedy surrounding it quite fun and interesting.

So its not like i hate the fic or think its bad. I just think the balancing didnt land with me and as a result i ended up not liking the fic

>> No.74662251

>>74661483
>but if your kid goes and commits incest then that turns that 4% into a 10% and so on and so forth.
Is that the problem here? Sorry you just literally blew my mind with your detailed post and I honestly thought the deformations started if you literally got your blood related sister pregnant.

>> No.74662983

>>74662251
yeah its a problem over the years. think about it like a stacking debuff in a game.
1% for you? no big deal and if you get it...well tough luck.
>Next generation commits incest
10%? oh it might hit you. You should stop right now
>Next generations commits incest
35%?? nigga stop! you are playing with fire!
>etc etc.

Its why you can marry second cousin and why japan has such a kink with incest in general. Its mostly fine, but if you let it go rampant then it becomes a problem.
Of course, deformities aside, its the whole social aspect of it. Some people might raise an eyebrow for a second if you go "oh yeah i married the daughter of my dad's cousin" but its mostly fine unless they are a weird puritan.
"Yeah i impregnated my aunt" well..that's quite the conversation starter.

My grandparents didnt want my uncle to marry their daughter because they thought he was the son of a cousin...of my grandpa's cousin. Some people get weird about this stuff, but they eventually came around

>> No.74663397
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>>74662251
NTA but it's all about risk at first. You risk some congenital defects because they are mostly coded by recessive genes, some of which you might share with your blood relatives. Recessive genes come into play only when your child has a copy of that gene from you and your partner.
High school-grade genetics problem: you have two plants with genotype Aa ("A" means dominant gene of, let's say, green leaves, "a" means recessive gene of black leaves). After breeding them, you get offspring with one of three possible permutations of genes: AA, green leaves with 25% probability; Aa, green leaves but carrying the black leaf gene with 50% probability; aa, black leaves with 25% probability. It's massively oversimplifying but the same kind of dice roll is going on with every gene in your body.
Habsburg-tier deformities begin over many generations of accumulating failed dice rolls, ignoring all the children who died in the womb and shortly after birth.

>> No.74664866

>Discussion about fucking your aunt turns into a conversation about biology.
I love this place

>> No.74664905

>>74662983
>>74663397
Thanks for explaining it to a dumb retard like me. I actually (not surprising) didn't know any of this in depth and learning something new is always an interesting experience.

I still wouldn't want to see stuff like deformations in fanfics though. But that's just me and I seriously hope (although I don't mind risks and such) I ain't the only with with this train of logic.

>> No.74665042

>>74650897
I've recently added a couple of words to the previously unbudging WIP.
Sora got swapped out for Subaru, though.
Just gotta flesh out the friendship between the virgin boy and the slut who thinks she thinks nothing of taking his virgnity (without realizing how fucked she is and how hard she's going to fall for him)

And of course, the inevitable final cuck

>> No.74665124

>>74664866
My takeaway is that if i do incest its based but if my kid does it he's a selfish fuck for poisoning our bloodline.

>> No.74665283

>>74665042
>Sora got swapped out for Subaru, though.
I know its just my opinion but hasn't Subaru suffered enough?

>> No.74665430
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>>74665283
Not yet.

>> No.74665543

>>74665430
Your image makes me somewhat wish for a part three of FoD.

>> No.74665665
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74665665

>>74665283
Sometimes drama is good and you cant make drama where everyone is happy

>> No.74667456

Now that Subaru is brought up... Cousin Subaru...

>> No.74667626
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74667626

Which vtuber's pussy is the most umami-rich?

>> No.74667746

>>74667626
>Learning what your body is for with your cousin Subaru while your dad gets in an argument with your uncle over fucking his wife Mio (Subaru's actually your sistetr)

>> No.74667790

>>74667746
meant fot>>74667456

>> No.74668205

>>74667746
Make it so the mom is Lui or Reine for the bird theme.
And also add Mumei for the sister sex and some dumb bird excuse for why you have to bang your family

>> No.74668886

>>74668205
>Mom lui
>Big sister Nerissa
>Twin Subaru
>Little sister mumei
>Aunt Reine
>Cousin Kiara
Fertilize the eggs anon...do it...

>> No.74669847

>>74668886

The twist is that you're also a bird.

>> No.74669889

>>74669847
This, but you're like an actual bird. Like a pigeon who somehow scored with all of his family members

>> No.74669905

>>74669847
Male bird.
Unless its the gayest fic ever produced in this thread

>> No.74670669
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74670669

>>74576336
I humbly request more trap!Suisei

>> No.74671767

>>74669889
An actual bird seducing bird chuubas would be kino.

>> No.74672276

>>74671767
>Puh-prr, prr
>"Anon... H-How can you say those things?" Lui blushed
>Anon flaps his wings
>"B-But, we can't...! Come on, don't mess with me... I'm your aunt..."
>Prrr
>"Anon..."
>Wind flapping noises ensue.

>> No.74672965

>>74672276
>Reine opens the door
>Lui is naked on the bed, barely covering herself,hair a mess
>"NEECHAN??"
>*flapping under the covers*
>"ANON?!!"

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>> No.74675019

>>74672965
>>74672276
Spicy!

>> No.74675202
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74675202

>>74672276
>>74672965
based

>> No.74675604
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74675604

>>74662251
Yeah you mostly want to avoid things like this family tree

>> No.74675727
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74675727

I dont care if there are no risks
I am not fucking my aunt

>> No.74676049

>>74675604
What deformations am I suppose to be seeing here, anon?

>> No.74676444
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74676444

>>74675727
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jo-A2-nuXMo

>> No.74676680

>>74676049
Look at those eyes, they're ginormous!

>> No.74676889
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74676889

>>74639030
I'm sure there are, unfortunately I didn't pick up my action scenes from reading other ones, I watch a lot of MMA and pro wrestling so they mainly come from that, so I'm not sure where to point you.

>>74676049
There's a reason there's no pictures of the sons anon

>> No.74676994

>>74676680
I think they look cute but that's probably just me and I am a real big retard with stupid taste in stuff. It'd be a problem if it were "am i kawaii uguu~" size.
>>74676889
I assume the sons look more deformed than what the daughters do, anon?

Sorry if my reply looks messy unlike what yours is.

>> No.74677090

>>74676994
Anon you're thinking far too literally with this, obviously it's fiction so they can just have the kids not be deformed, but if it was irl some of those kids would have issues.

>> No.74677200

>>74677090
I deeply apologise for not getting the joke and taking everything at face value. No I do not mean that in a sarcastic manner.

>> No.74677310

>>74675727
Same, unless she's 2 or more years younger than me.

>> No.74677837

>>74671767
All chuubas should be seduced by someone of the same species. Noel should be seduced by me, for example.

>> No.74679202
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74679202

>>74677837
>Sorry, human girl. Humies live for kemono pussy.
>>74576336
Risu going on 'especial purity' forums and trolling both sides by acting like someone who likes to fuck different species.

>> No.74679422
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74679422

>>74677837
I've had an idea for a scene for a bit now where (You) are a half-elf and sleep with Flare, only for her to freak out the next morning because she sees your I.D and you're like 70 so to her you're basically a child(she's 226)

>> No.74679630
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>>74677837
>tfw im half moon

>> No.74680665

>>74679202
>I love getting leashed by my human. When the heat hits, I tell him to put a little inside of me, and then he brings out the collar and the leash and makes me beg for it... so hot
>40+ replies from mad kemonomimi
>A few kemono girls agree with the OP
>They're also Risu

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74681159

>>74576336
You're caught having sex with a 17-year-old (actually 30) pirate woman and get thrown into prison. Together with your cellmate Pekora you start planning a prison break and you swear revenge on Marine who would make you go to prison rather than confess her real age. This story is possible because Chuuba City is a dysfunctional shithole and has mixed prisons.

>> No.74681515

>>74680665
you are not thinking like a shitposter anon. She would post

>God kemonos are such disgusting freaks. Imagine getting all wet just for a fucking leash. Fucking beasts humping pillows once a month because they cant stop themselves

and then falseflagging by responding to herself with
>admit it, you just want to spread your genes with one of them barn animals, dont you Billy? ya redneck son of a bitch
and then farm the thread to shitpost in the other forum. Rinse and repeat until she has made 50 people seethe, 30 people cope, 10 people get banned and everyone horny

>> No.74681653

>>74681159
>spoiler
And an AoC of 18.

>> No.74681855
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74681855

>>74681653
Indeed

>> No.74684424

>>74677837
>Biboo getting caught in bed with a cubic zirconium (she thought he was a Dimond.)

>> No.74685198

>>74684424
Biboo in Houseki no Kuni

>> No.74686532

>>74684424
>dang it, that's why he stayed soft!

>> No.74689077

>>74576275

>> No.74692164

>>74684424
Roboco being sent to the pedo wing because they found her jailbreaking the latest iphone

>> No.74692168

>>74677837
How does that work for the virtual talents?

>> No.74692238

>>74692164
>you sick bitch, this is a iPhone 15

>> No.74692652

>>74692168
Azki, a hag, should only have sex with winrar
Me? I uploaded a file of my cum and mailed it to azki. See ya later virgins

>> No.74693237

>>74692168
>>74692652
Azki is a torrent I seeded her

>> No.74693859

>>74576336
Holos as slaves, but Anon is John Brown.

>> No.74694172
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>>74672276

Lui when you hit her with the

>> No.74694700

>>74692164

What is sex even like for an android, I wonder? Now you've got me thinking. Orgasm would probably threaten to fry every circuit in her head.

>> No.74696289

>>74694700
She has the proper hardware and software, it's an amazing feeling for both you and her. I don't have the gif of her mechanical vagina though, so you'll have to imagine it.

>> No.74696640

>>74696289

I mean, I guess that makes sense. Why does she have a vag at all, though? She's not equipped to have kids, unless they're some sort of fucked up artificial cyborg babies.

>> No.74696792

>>74696640
She analyzes your cum and tells you if you have any health issues

>> No.74696947

>>74696792

Other than the bacteria now crawling up your urethra after you fucked her stale robot pussy. I seriously hope that thing cleans itself.

>> No.74697037

>>74696947
This is just baseless slander.

>> No.74697181

>>74696640
>>74696792
I mean, depending on the setting, Roboco could install a home module that allows her body to create an ovum made with her data, release it into her chamber, then have sex with her synthetic genitals and once you impregnate it, it grows on her synthetic tank
It wouldnt be so different from a weird in vitro thing

>> No.74697189

>>74697037

Speculation. If she doesn't clean her insides out every time, it's going to get nasty.

>> No.74697337

>>74697189
She's high-spec and very hot, bacteria wouldn't survive.

>> No.74697338

>>74697181

I mean, in theory, then, she could just inject code directly into the ovum to affect the outcome of the fertilization any way you wanted. You could have a veritable character customizer.

>> No.74697456

>>74697337

Coming away with scorch marks up and down your cock after you stuck your Johnny Lawrence in a 215-degree oven.

Worth.

>> No.74697510

>>74697456
Just make sure to lube up with cooling fluid

>> No.74697709

>>74697510

Roboco's systems could probably manufacture their own coolant, if for some reason she needed that. If this thing is designed for sex, you need to make sure you can actually stick your dick in it.

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>> No.74700962
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>>74576336
impregnating genderbends to fully convert them to women forever

>> No.74701928

>>74700962

Can I be the first?

>> No.74702216

>>74701928
There are two possible explanations for your statement
I will give you one chance to elaborate as to which one it is
Either way, the answer is no

>> No.74702341

>>74702216
Anon you gotta fuck anonnete. She's already eyeing shiori and subscribing to Nerissa! we have to act fast

>> No.74702429
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74702429

>>74702341
I will NEVER cheat on my wife

>> No.74702942

>>74702216

I want to be genderbent and impregnated. What is there to misunderstand?

>> No.74703071

>>74702942
there far too many chuubas into Bl to make this joke effective so just go to sleep

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>>74702942
You could have meant being the first one to impregnate a genderbend
Anyway as said above, no
Big tiddy chocolate erogaki demon first

>> No.74703130

>>74703071

It is about 9PM. Maybe I should.

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>>74702341
Shiori impregnated Nerissa with her BBC (Big Bicolor Cock) already.
I find it funny how her haha no homo shtick with nerissa keeps somehow getting gayer and gayer

>> No.74703636

>>74703195
nothing more heterosexual than magically impregnating your friend with two kids

>> No.74703732

>>74702942
>Genderbend Mio playing out his breeding kink on Anonnete
H m m m

>> No.74705296
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>>74576336
Helping Mococo find the foreigner manipulating her image

>> No.74705507

>>74705296
Better yet
>you are a foreigner
>steal Mococo's DNA
>make tons of clones of her
>manipulate their image with a series of bizarre and disgusting experiments
>be condemned by the Japanese government for war crimes

>> No.74705800

>>74700962
this but with shien

>> No.74706110

>>74705507
>"Okay your honor but you have to admit it was funny"
>"Hahah yeah...whaet"
>"Hahaha"
>"Electric chair btw"

>> No.74706376
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my coyote wife..

>> No.74707111
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>>74705800
Sure, you can have her

>> No.74709139

Rise

>> No.74710216

>>74706376
what is the key for...

>> No.74710486

>>74710216
Hopefully to the cure for he fucked up legs what the hell

>> No.74712599

>>74707111
The perfect GF. Think about it.
>Stupid
>Cute
>Total bro to be around
>Stupid
>Kind of cool, kind of cute at the same time
>BOSS
>Stupid
>Electrocutes herself to orgasm
>STUPID

>> No.74712992
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74712992

>>74712599
>goes out wearing her underwear thinking they're normal clothes
Hmm...you might be on to something here

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>>74712599
I’ll stick with choccy majin tiddies, but you raise some good points

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>>74576336
WMAF: Light Fantasy Edition
>Elven traveller from the West falls in love with an oni (Ayame of course) in not-Japan

>> No.74719348
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74719348

I love these hoes

>> No.74720611

I'd you were writing a love triangle / harem style series, how would you pick the winner?
>decide the winner before you start writing and make the others obvious jobbers
>let the fan favourite win
>give it to the girl that ended up having the best story
>be a spineless homosexual and go with an inconclusive, harem, or everybody wins ending
>pick your personal favorite regardless of the circumstances

>> No.74720841

>>74720611
I would rather let my characters decide. If the main character is being an indecisive bitch, let the girls decide for him. Have some girls knock others out of the competition through lies and slander and threats. Have others opt out.
Stadium love, no holds barred, let the best girl win.
In this manner, the girl who wants it most wins.

>> No.74720997

>>74720611
>Writing purely for myself
I'd give it to whoever deserves the win (read: the one I liked writing the most that has chemistry.)
>Actual published thing
I'd be a coward and be bullied into writing an ending for everyone's 'routes'.

>> No.74721194

>>74720611
3 and 5 are the only ones I respect, and with how Near Sighted Elder Sister ended I have a lot of fucking vitriol built up in case anybody wants to fuck a romance I get invested in.

>> No.74721293

>>74720611
This question caused me to think about writing a harem series myself and now I sort of want to choke myself to death
Like no hate to the people who want to write and read that stuff but man
Writing out one of those would make me physically ill from how much I would be aching to write anything else

>> No.74721658

>>74720611
>decide the winner before you start writing and make the others obvious jobbers
I don't know about making them obvious jobbers but this is closest to my ideal. The #1 thing I prioritize in storytelling is that all parts of the story feel integrated with the whole, so that when you reach the ending everything clicks together in a satisfying way.

>> No.74722090

>>74720611
Honestly thinking about this more, why the hell would you ever go with
>decide the winner before you start writing and make the others obvious jobbers
If you're making a harem series, making the other girls big enough jobbers that they don't get fans hoping for them to win seems like it undercuts the very point of having it be a harem instead of just a normal romance.

>> No.74722385

>>74722090
I don't see it as much lately, but back in the day a lot of anime and manga would have an obvious main girl who would be like the title character, in every episode, and on all the posters and stuff, and then 2-4 additional side characters would also thirst after the guy but everyone knew they had no shot. I guess it might have been because harem was popular back then so it was easier to get published that way.

>> No.74722841

>>74720611
If it were up to me, nobody would win because I'd have written it in a way that deconstructs the entire concept of the 'love triangle'. Either that, or the winner is a dark horse minor character that suddenly becomes major by the latter part of the story.

>> No.74723118

>>74722841
The dark horse play is either 100% based or 100% series killing. Watching Chained Soldier right now, and it fucking blows because some random smug bitch with a terribly unfitting VA is first in the running for the MCbowl, and the authors haven't even given time to develop main girl and the MC's relationship.

>> No.74723227

>>74723118
>>74722841
Dark horse minor character wins only really works if you can somehow make that shit have chemistry. And not just normal chemistry either, it has to be something akin to a Dream Girl/ Perfect Match that makes MC and FeMC's relationship look like a mistake. Since effectively you're gambling that you can make a heart pounding connection to the audience without much 'time' left to build it up. So unless dark horse-chan has been stealthy building up appeal all this time then she needs to make the arc/episode she appears in be fucking magical.

>> No.74723688

>>74717494
That Elven traveller? Me.

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>>74722090
>making the other girls big enough jobbers that they don't get fans hoping
It's the absolute worst when you know that no matter how the story tries to bait you, it's hopeless, the best girl isn't going to win... but you still can't help but read/watch it to the end. Watching Golden Time was the furthest thing from golden time for me, it was pure fucking torment.

>> No.74724040

>>74720611
>>74722841
I think the winner has to be set in stone beforehand (due to the themes of your story) but you need to do your best to fool your audience. Unironically im going to bring up Nisekoi and The world god only knows as adept comparisons.

Nisekois thematic is all about the damn lock and key (aka the destined one) and the ending is obviously raku throwing it away because the lock was getting in the way of his love. Its executed poorly because it meanders and yadda yadda but the idea behind him picking chitose works (you grow to love someone, you change over the years and isnt set in stone). Its just the execution and the endless meandering.

Twgok had a dark horse winner and it makes sense (mc whose name cant remember picks the one girl his gamer charms dont work on and who he can never predict) but the character had 0 chemistry and was extremely unlikeable in general. The author did a good job on fooling everyone but he made an unlikeable cunt that no one liked the winner.

Honorable mention to go toubun. It pulls a good darkhorsw winner but shits itself by not commiting to it and still pussyfooting around.
>>74723118
Funny you mention matoseihei because that series has a harem design so interesting. Its so obvious that kyouka is gonna win due to being the MC(she gets more characterization) that the author can comfortably whore the mc and set up an effective harem if they desire

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74724077

>>74576336
Mio gets dismembered by the cartel

>> No.74724324

I wish I could heckle all the writers here and throw peanuts at them while they work while shouting playground taunts

>> No.74724333

>>74720611
I feel like the entire concept of keeping readers on their toes for the whole story is cheap manipulative ragebaiting with no possible satisfying conclusion so I wouldn't write it in the first, but if I did, I'd be a slightly less spineless homosexual and give everyone a route but make it clear that's what's gonna happen from the start.

>> No.74724370

>>74724324
Why do writers just dont write? Are they stupid?

>> No.74724390

>>74679422
>fantasizing about fucking a 226 year old elf

You make me sick. I've seen some fucked up fetishes here but this is particularly fucking her out of the womb. You should be ashamed of yourself

>> No.74724545
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>>74724077
>Yagoo when he realizes the girls are running a drug business as a side hustle and that the cops are onto them

>> No.74726403
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>> No.74727597

>>74720611
In an actual harem, everyone wins.

>> No.74728571

Any news on the continuation for the GB Watson series?

>> No.74729011
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>>74720611
I'd have the winner set from the get-go. A "new girl" should serve as an obstacle between the MC and the heroine as well as being a catalyst for growth for the heroine by being the antithesis of her. If the main heroine is a troublesome woman, have the rival be well-adjusted. They should be equal, but opposite.

I'd never write a full-blown harem because I've seen those buckle under their own weight and eventually collapse into parody. After all, they keep adding new girls to keep the series going. Not to mention most MCs are bland to the point of being noncharacters. A love triangle I would consider but you would have to write them to be a serious enough contender that the reader doubts the MC and the Heroine's bond, but not seriously enough that the meta of the story actually allows the "what if". It's a fine line.

That said, I still want that fic where two Stacies get catty with each other as they fight over you

>> No.74729703

>>74726403
Maririn... your weak genes...

>> No.74729867

>>74722090
It’s to make your self insert MC seem like more of a super charismatic chad. See SAO where he had his sister, the loli and the blacksmith lusting after him despite being married and never showing interest in anyone else.

>> No.74730027

>>74729011
I wouldnt say a harem needs to keep adding girls. Thats just the hack way (and the editorial way to keep milking a series) to increase the stakes and move the plot.
If you define 5 girls from the start and slowly introduce them to then flesh them out then you dont need 20 extra girls to work as salad dressing.

Of course its easy to talk from a hobby perspective. Getting your story published is another beast entirely and on top of that you have to juggle readers who self insert and those that read harems just for the feeling and not the idea of being the father of 5 kids from different mothers

>> No.74730727

>>74728571
That anon hasn't been spotted here for years at this point. The series is dead, and given that it was only posted here, we have no clue if that anon is literally dead or doing something else.

>> No.74731010

>>74729703
Please consider this fact: the child was born as a human instead of a rabbit

>> No.74731621

>>74730027
When you're a mangaka pressed for time (and you're always pressed for time) it's the simplest way to justify the status quo. But my overall point is that harems eventually devolve into triteness or become vestigial to the overall story. The harem game can only be bearable for both the reader and the author for so long. And honestly, I feel like harems are stories meant for the readers first rather than stories for the authors. They generally lack the kind of spark that makes the story and the winner special.

>> No.74731819

>>74731010
Man... Imagine making peko pregnant but when she gives birth it's just a litter of literal rabbits/nousagi instead of a person.

>> No.74732981

>>74729867
I found it sort of amusing in FF7 how Cloud looks like the perfect bishounen but almost every girl in Midgar treats him like a weird creep for some reason.

>> No.74734854

Wake up

>> No.74736188

>>74732981
Because they can sense the weirdo he is inside

>> No.74738697

No dying! There are fics to be read, fics to be written, hags to be impregnated!!!

>> No.74739724
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>>74576336
Impregnating Miko and the subsequent daily struggles of raising a pair of kids with painfully average intelligence as a result!

>> No.74740795

>>74739724
Would Miko's health problems help her survive giving birth?

>> No.74741032

Not that I'm complaining but is there an unspoken tacit agreement that almost 50% of Suisei fics are incest?

>> No.74741287

>>74741032
It was quite interesting reading the Suisei twincest fic (A Taste of Sin 1) as someone who has the same birthday as Suisei. A Taste of Sin 2 when?

>> No.74741439

>>74741032
Not really. It would be like saying all of irys is smelly Fujo.
We just had a surge of suisest and since She's split among so many genres it looks like incest is over represented.
Im an activist for suismell but if the people vote incest, then we have to respect it

>> No.74741681

>>74741439
Solution: Combine Suismell with Suicest.....

>> No.74741778

>>74741681
The forbidden suiformula.
That kind of talk would get you hanged, stranger.

>> No.74741951

You cant just add sui to any fetish and be a thing

>> No.74742175

>>74740795
God, don't bring that into the world of fiction
>Hold your baby daughters, Miko had twins
>You had already fainted once while she was popping them out
>Miko calls out to you, 'Nyeh... Nyeh...' she whimpers, her hand reaching out to you.
>Migo-chan...?
>Rush to her side, her eyes aren't looking anywhere but into nothingness
>Aynon... Our bay-bees. Adr they... adr they okay...?
>Yes...? Miko-chan, is something wrong...?
>I'm happy...
>Ha, ease up... You have to get some rest-
>I'm so happy... Migo got to... do it with you...
>Her eyes lose all color
>Her body couldn't handle birth
>The doctors rush to her aid, while you hear the cries of your children being carried away by the nurses.
>Cue the single father antics, like your 4 year olds finding you coddled up inside your car while you're ugly crying looking at photos of you and Miko, of you and your daughters, but never the three together
>Cue Anon meeting the chuubas that will turn his life around and give a mommy to his beloved rays of pink sunshine

>> No.74742634

>>74741951
Im gonna do suianal!

>> No.74742689

>>74741951
What about SuiSui?

>> No.74742815

>>74742175
>God, don't bring that into the world of fiction
But then it wouldn't be Miko if she didn't have her health problems in a fic.

>> No.74743092

>>74741951
Suisei is the best

>> No.74744066

>>74576336
Accidentally getting a chuuba pregnant and having to learn how to be a dad

>> No.74744316

>>74741951
Suicatecture...

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>>74741681
jacking off while huffing your sister Suisei's sweaty thong after dance practice...

>> No.74746868

>>74746494
Made for getting heartbroken and cuckquean'd by her friends

>> No.74747831
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>>74576336
playfighting with your friend nene!
Getting a bit too into it with the grapples!
Flipping her switch as you finally overpower her!
Sex with nene!
Rough, brutish borderline abusive sex with nene who is on cloud nine after you start choking and slapping her!
Aftercare with Nene!

>> No.74749755

>>74747831
>Nene leaking from a pleased pussy, from a bloody nose, and smiling with a face that's white red and blue.
Hnnng, my dick...

>> No.74749775

>>74747831
Would she fight back and tease to get punished in the moment?

>> No.74750775

What is THAT line from a fic for you?
>You need to stop gathering evidence for a trial that will never take place

>> No.74751726
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>>74747831
Yes. Inject it right it into my veins.
I wanna do this with Botan too.

>> No.74753818

>>74746553
>Play dumb when she asks if you know why her bras and panties keep disappearing every time she does laundry
>'Accidentally' forget when she's taking a bath and walk into the bathroom when she's naked
>'Mistakenly' set the A/C to heat in the summer so she walks around all sweaty in her underwear
>Always offer to put her shoes away when she gets home so you can sniff her freshly warn footwear

>> No.74754354

>>74747831
This, except with more holds and throws

>> No.74754631

>>74749755
>A mixture of cum, snot and blood out of her nose after the rough throathfuck
>pulling her head as you pronebone her without mercy
>pull her head a bit more
>Nene's eyes lost all the light out of pleasure, She's genuinely fainting.
>smack her across the face.
>Cums like a hose and drools
and then later on laughs as you mop because you thought it was a bit too much

>> No.74754851

>>74749755
>>74754631
>Nenechi defending you in front of her friends saying she likes to get beat, and that it's her issue if she wants to get roughed up a little
>You cover your face in embarrassment as Nenechi yaps on
>"Anon! Let's go!"
>You nod, and start pushing on her wheelchair.

>> No.74757114

>>74742689
Loving Suisei so much you become Suisei?

>> No.74757552
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>>74757114
>Suisei I love you so much I turned into a thought entity, entered your brain and now live entirely within your Suiconscious, isn't that amazing!?
>AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>> No.74758458

>>74757114
Funniest shit I ever read

>> No.74759519

>>74750775
A recent one I liked:
>“I gave you an out,” you reply. “These are just the consequences.”

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dying!? Not for me!

>> No.74763023

>>74762705
Unlike her eggs

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>>74763023

>> No.74765856
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>>74739724
Way ahead of you

>> No.74766258

>>74757114
>>74757552
Now I'm envisioning a story where anon loves his oshi Suisei so much he wakes up one day as a disembodied voice inside her head and the rest of the story is a bunch of hijinks between anon's inappropriate fanboying stream of consciousness commentary and Suisei trying to go about her day as normally as possible

>> No.74766937

>>74765856
>yeah, me
heh

>> No.74767030

>>74766258
>"Suichan! eat your veggies!"
>SHUT UP! dont call me that!
>"If you dont eat your veggies you wont go to the bathroom!"
>...
>"its okay i wont peek"
>...
>"Okay i lied. please piss loudly"


or

>"Holy shit is Aqua!"
>yeah yeah
>"Can we molest her?"
>What??
>"Can we?"
>...
>"Pretty please?"
>Fine just because you said please

>> No.74768853

>>74767030
>Marine walks in on a naked SuiAnon making out with herself on the mirror

>> No.74771443

>>74766258
Then the twist ending is that Suisei was never possessed by anyone at all and it was just herself the entire time after she suffered a head injury and fell in love with herself.
Which will of course be foreshadowed by the story starting in a hospital.

>> No.74773493
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What do you think you're doing? Get up!

>> No.74773793

>>74773493
i was writting some futa but i got too horny again

>> No.74775119

>>74730727
Oh… that’s a shame, I was looking forward to that and the Cover Job continuation, but seeing that it’s been a while I should probably stop hoping

>> No.74775325

>>74775119
I'm pretty sure Cover Job still has a chance, but I'm reasonably certain that the writer for it is just obsessed with making full series releases instead of serial releases so they're just gone from the thread for months. (Assuming my memory is right and the Cover Job anon is the holocalypse writer.)

>> No.74776576

>>74775325
When I return by the year 2050 this better be done or I’m killing myself if I haven’t by then

>> No.74778858

>>74576336
Having wacky fun shenanigans as the sub-intern of HoloX
That turns too real when Laplus accidentally kills a hooker and Lui and you have to bury her body

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>>74576336
sex with zoomers

>> No.74779929
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I'll write... tomorrow...

>> No.74781864

>>74779929
Marine you dumb hag, thats why your eggs are going stale

>> No.74782654
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>>74781864
If writing guaranteed sex I don't think I'd be suffering from writer's block

>> No.74785759
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Just a few more!

>> No.74786146

>>74785759
Dude, TITS. And ASS.

>> No.74786955

>>74785759
I'd like to request either rabbit bread or pirate bread in commemoration for this picture.

>> No.74787962

>>74785759
I wish Marine was the monster hiding under my bed

>> No.74791714

>>74782654
You have to believe or it won't work. Like with Paul on the water.

>> No.74792354

Are there actually multiple wedgie fetishists in the thread, or is there just one dedicated anon? I didn’t even know that was a thing until earlier

>> No.74792427

>>74792354
just one

>> No.74792521

>>74792354
It's not my fetish specifically and I never wrote a fic with a wedgie, but I like the humiliation aspect of it.

>> No.74792552

>>74754851
Isn't a wheelchair too far? I mean, I ain't complaining if Nene's happy but it'd suck if she never recovered if she was wheelchair bound.

>> No.74792822

>>74792354
From what I've gathered, there's two. Possibly 3. But definitely not 4.

>> No.74793329

>>74792552
Pretty sure it's a joke where Nene's argument seems perfectly valid - until the twist ending reveals that you've crippled her permanently.

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74793386

>>74705507
>>make tons of clones of her
>one of the clones is a defect
>she escapes and lives as her own person
>she begins to degrade because of cell decay
>tries to live her best life despite this

>> No.74793636

>>74793329
Oh, right. My bad for not noticing the joke once again.

I do think it sounds kind of cute of nene defending you despite you perma crippling her. I'd feel like absolute shite if it were me that did it to her.

>> No.74793808

>>74793636
You could add another twist where she's been wheelchair-bound before you met her.

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